Thursday, November 4, 2010

Group 5: Brainstorming of ideas

(1) What do you think happened at the end?

She found a journal written by a person named Mandy and that girl mentioned about she was unhappy as she was bullied by her friends in school and she also faced family problem, that is her parents wanted to divorce. Hence, she was helpless and felt hopeless.

(2) Some interesting phrases we can use:

Picture (1): beautiful and breezy morning, deserted, browsed through, flipped through, what a pity, searching journey.
Picture (2): her eyes were caught in attention, pay full attention.
Picture (3): driven by curiosity, tempted, mind battle, inquisitiveness.
Picture (4): frustrated, sympathize with, clueless, alert, do a good deed

(3) What are some ways we can use to help make the transition between pictures smooth?
We can talk more about the actions that may happen in between the pictures yet did not show up in the pictures. We can use more interesting phrases to describe the main character, the surrounding and the atmosphere.

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